FLOETRY

TrainRide

Posted On 02/04/2010 16:16:19 by DavidAMi

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Traveling in silence
cautionary looks
warn of discomfort

Going out of my
way, on my own
hoping to see
a friendly face

Akward smiles
sidelong glances
people afraid of
letting their guard down

Stare longer than
warranted and a smile
turns into a frown

Rocked side to side
hiding behind sunglasses
it is nighttime

Blocking out the world
with headphones
at least , till the batteries die

Then, you will be forced
to respond
if a question is directed
at you.

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From: DavidAMi

02/16/2010 02:25:06

thanks for the props man

KeFe wrote:

i like your concept... ill write

From: KeFe

02/14/2010 10:49:10

i like your concept... ill write

From: DavidAMi

02/07/2010 02:30:48

Thanks, no problem

InspirationDiva wrote:
I loved the flow of your poem! Nice, Original and Unique.. I actually felt like I was on the train and enjoying the experience...Thanks for Sharing !

From: InspirationDiva

02/06/2010 22:09:22

I loved the flow of your poem! Nice, Original and Unique.. I actually felt like I was on the train and enjoying the experience...Thanks for Sharing !

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